Hey! It's evanescodarkness from TDM. Sorry for taking so long to get to your story! Sometimes life gets in the way.

While the story has a very interesting dynamic, I think the beginning could have a little more explanation about why Pansy knows that without Draco there that Bellatrix would target her.

I enjoyed the scene where Hermione shoots the spell through Bellatrix's heart. I found that scene, including the two lines at the end the best part of the story. I created a great scene in my head as I read it, as if I was actually there.